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Writing Term1
WILF
I use short (simple) sentences correctly.
I make some sentences longer by joining them with conjunctions (joining words) like ‘and’, ‘but’ or ‘because’.
I sometimes use conjunctions (joiners) correctly to start my sentences. eg ‘Before . . .’ , ‘After . . .’ , When . . .’ , Because . . .’ ‘When . . .’.
I use ‘tense’ (past, present or future) correctly most of the time.
Writing Task: Think back to a really special experience you have had. It might be a birthday, a family dinner or a trip somewhere. Write a recount about it. |
Starter sentence:
It was just another ordinary day but we were going to bmx in havelock to race.It was going to be fun.I got to have a braktis on the track.It was now time for racing .I zoomed around the track and came first by a hole srat.It was time for my next race I came 1st '1st'1st'1st 2nd.I got a trophy for winning in the final round then we got a ice cream.The flavour was caramel.Itwas a big one.Then I got to play around on the track and do some jump then I went home to go to bed . It had been A very nice time but I was so tired from that very long day.I had dinner with my dad and mum
.Then I went to sleep in my room.
Next steps - I am still working on improving my tense.